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Zhong The Wolf God and Admins De Facto Demigod scalier-than-thou Posts: 2,309 CYS Account: BradinDvorak	Designs Jul 19, 2015 16:46:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zhong on Jul 19, 2015 16:46:02 GMT -5 What do you think of this design for one of the games I've been working on? That's the title screen and a sample page. (The text in the second image is German-esque placeholder text and probably doesn't mean anything.)
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Panther Warrior Wolf The Shapeshifter Posts: 1,122 OC: Team LASR	Designs Jul 19, 2015 17:03:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Panther on Jul 19, 2015 17:03:53 GMT -5 It's great.... can't wait for ToW and your storygames. Is it German language only?

Zhong The Wolf God and Admins De Facto Demigod scalier-than-thou Posts: 2,309 CYS Account: BradinDvorak	Designs Jul 19, 2015 17:10:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zhong on Jul 19, 2015 17:10:51 GMT -5 Oh, no, no. It's in English with occasional German phrases thrown in. Taken verbatim from the story: “Ach so,” he says. “Feigning innocence. A dirty trick.” In that case, "ach so" roughly translates to "I see".
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Panther Warrior Wolf The Shapeshifter Posts: 1,122 OC: Team LASR	Designs Jul 19, 2015 17:13:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Panther on Jul 19, 2015 17:13:05 GMT -5 Oh, good.... that's the same of what the panzergrenadiers in my storygame would say.

Zhong The Wolf God and Admins De Facto Demigod scalier-than-thou Posts: 2,309 CYS Account: BradinDvorak	Designs Jul 19, 2015 17:16:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zhong on Jul 19, 2015 17:16:35 GMT -5 If Betrüger was all in German, I don't think anyone would bother to read it.
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Panther Warrior Wolf The Shapeshifter Posts: 1,122 OC: Team LASR	Designs Jul 19, 2015 17:18:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Panther on Jul 19, 2015 17:18:18 GMT -5 Yeah, they would need google translate for that.

Zhong The Wolf God and Admins De Facto Demigod scalier-than-thou Posts: 2,309 CYS Account: BradinDvorak	Designs Jul 19, 2015 17:20:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zhong on Jul 19, 2015 17:20:20 GMT -5 Right. I wouldn't do something so alienating.
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Mardox Honored Wolf The Dark Lord of the Felridge The Dark One has returned! Posts: 2,542 CYS Account: N/A	Designs Aug 2, 2015 15:46:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mardox on Aug 2, 2015 15:46:48 GMT -5 It's nice. But like Raven discussed, English would be nice.
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Zhong The Wolf God and Admins De Facto Demigod scalier-than-thou Posts: 2,309 CYS Account: BradinDvorak	Designs Aug 2, 2015 19:18:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zhong on Aug 2, 2015 19:18:31 GMT -5 English with bits of German strewn about.
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Mardox Honored Wolf The Dark Lord of the Felridge The Dark One has returned! Posts: 2,542 CYS Account: N/A	Designs Aug 2, 2015 19:19:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mardox on Aug 2, 2015 19:19:38 GMT -5 Any High Felridgean?
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Zhong The Wolf God and Admins De Facto Demigod scalier-than-thou Posts: 2,309 CYS Account: BradinDvorak	Designs Aug 2, 2015 19:23:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zhong on Aug 2, 2015 19:23:42 GMT -5 Nah; it's set in a German-influenced location.
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Mardox Honored Wolf The Dark Lord of the Felridge The Dark One has returned! Posts: 2,542 CYS Account: N/A	Designs Aug 2, 2015 19:25:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mardox on Aug 2, 2015 19:25:53 GMT -5 Ok then... Plus you probably don't know High Felridgean...
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Zhong The Wolf God and Admins De Facto Demigod scalier-than-thou Posts: 2,309 CYS Account: BradinDvorak	Designs Aug 2, 2015 19:35:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zhong on Aug 2, 2015 19:35:06 GMT -5 Not enough to express anything meaningful.
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Mardox Honored Wolf The Dark Lord of the Felridge The Dark One has returned! Posts: 2,542 CYS Account: N/A	Designs Aug 2, 2015 19:36:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mardox on Aug 2, 2015 19:36:18 GMT -5 Could you remind me what you know?
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Chris: You know, would've figured this place burned down or something. Ah well. Unless someone pops in here out of morbid curiosity a few months from now or some random internet dweller pops in, no one will see this. Apr 30, 2019 20:32:06 GMT -5

Chris: Seeing the stuff you wrote four years ago is really weird. Almost humbling. Like "haha, you were this idiot." Reminds me of where I came from I guess. Apr 30, 2019 20:32:56 GMT -5

Chris: Anyway, guess this is where I leave. Be sure to put your grasses on folks. This is ya boi Snakeboy455, signin' out. Apr 30, 2019 20:56:05 GMT -5